Tuesday 15 October 2019

Auckland

My Trip To Auckland



I loved Auckland, but the trip up there was better.

 It wasn't a big plane but it had tables that fold out of the seats in front of you so I was able to do a Sudoku but it was rather hard to solve but it was time to land before I knew so I never got to finish my Sudoku.

When me and mum landed dad was waiting for us. We went to my sisters house to see my nephews. almost every day there I played one hour of Minecraft.

8 comments:

  1. Hi Ronan, sounds like a awesome holiday! Remember your full stops.

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  2. Hi Ronan W, your Auckland trip sounds great! remember to do punctuation though.

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  3. The tables sound rather complicated awesome blog post!
    Hamish

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  4. Hi Ronan sounds like fun make sure to re-read your story

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  5. Hi Ronan
    I have been to Auckland loads! I would of liked more information. why were you going to auckland? why were you playing mine craft? when did you go to Auckland. Check for full stops and capital letters

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  6. Hi Ronan. I've only been to Auckland once to go to Rainbow's End. What is Sudoku?? Can we have more information? When I was on my flight to Auckland I don't think we had tables so that sounded cool.

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  7. Hi Ronan My name is Toby and I go to belfast school. I like how you have describe what the plane was inside. Do you like any other games? Maybe you could say how long you were they for and how long the plane ride and what you saw when you were going to auckland. BTW you can check out my blog https://bsstobyj.blogspot.com

    Toby

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  8. Hi Ronan My name is Aston and i go to Belfast school
    I like how you were very descriptive and how and what you were doing maybe next time say more about what happend when you landed and your first thoughts.

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